a voice that lingers

In the rose, a voice that
          lingers   in

its thorn, a whisper  in
          each woken

rasp of spring, a roar
          that rhymes with sin

2 comments on “a voice that lingers

  1. Love this. I also really like the formatting. So many writers ignore the importance of the formatting. It gives definition to your words and makes them so much more powerful. Great work

    • huzaifazoom says:

      Thanks so much 🙂 It’s a bit like regular speech: how you say what you say makes a difference (of course there is more than one way of getting it right, but you only get to say it once.)

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