Karachi – Snatches

I. Afternoon
Just afternoon,ย  just when collages of retrograde commerce
mishmash, coalesce with a train of thought conditioned

by imperial diktat – of the gorasaab says kind –
by identity wars – of the god says kind –

ooh the electric eclecticity
aah the wounds

when dust settles – dust will never settle in Karachi for dust is its abode its essential throwback to primordia
when dust settles – attempting to outflank the sewerage shining brazen baking in the hearth of sun.

II. Winter
There is no need for winter; the crust has been cold
for long and the discontent has chilled song for

long enough.

If you rejoice the odd winter breeze from the hills
up above, recall too the their chilled song gone for

long enough.

III. Dawn
No not the chirpy chirpy, not the
oil for breakfast, not the lingering
stench of last night’s blood. Grain

of morning wakes up to smell the
doodh-patti, the attentive bird
is reluctant to sound out for fear

of falling into the redundant abyss
of chic billboards inviting you plainly
to observe the absence of song.

6 comments on “Karachi – Snatches

  1. Ysabel Klara says:

    Wow, this is simply a stunning and moving piece of writing:)

  2. huzaifazoom says:

    I think I wrote the three pieces on separate days, and then it made sense to put them all together as one. Thank you ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. thotpurge says:

    These are just outstanding…. will come back to read them again for sure. Also makes me want a cup of doodh patti chai!

    • huzaifazoom says:

      It has only been slightly over a year since I wrote that, and I am not sure if I can write like that any more. Strange how it works. Glad you liked it. Thanks. And yes, given the sweltering heat right now, doodh patti sounds just right. Strange how that works too ๐Ÿ™‚

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