The green is full of this hour

The green is full of this hour  of
    need   trust in the thrust of
    giving – at most two mistakes are allowed

The age of the sun is now   of
    need   brown in this burn of
    hurt – after two mistakes the count is lost

The loam of the river sinks   of
    need   claim this calm of
    void – when you lose count you are free

4 comments on “The green is full of this hour

  1. João-Maria says:

    Oh, what formal bliss. The sound of structure.
    Brilliant, Huzaifa.

  2. Incredible words. The freedom at the end was an incredible release. As always in awe. 🙂

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