severance of dawn

Some night precludes dawn
    in its severance   in its
    walled

Temper, the
    stare of morning touches the ball of night –
    whisper then   we sing to the hum of
                this bee which lets
                your night become
    my wall

4 comments on “severance of dawn

  1. adminclouds says:

    Dawn severing night insightful but a wall of night … that’s something to press against I’d think. Really compelling images these

  2. adminclouds says:

    I need to get back to that book. Sitting right here, but life fills with other botherations.

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