the salt and the spear

i-
The salt and the spear
begin
    to wonder
    to woo to

walk – unshaken the spilt
part
    wonders too
    who to

call wind as the spear
knits
    wonder, knits
    wood into

salt

ii-
Large is the willow’s red – it is sound it is near – how near? as
your reach is bound to wrist to hip, that near – small is the
swollen sea – how small? as your paw is yearn is seen, that small –

2 comments on “the salt and the spear

  1. adminclouds says:

    Lots of W in this one. To good effect.

    Salt then has so much to it. I don’t think I’ve ever used it in a poem. Sort of beyond me.

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