mornglazed eyes
tiptoed dreams and their whys: they
are nearer to us to you to me these
lovetangled ephemera sub-
conscioned into day, brought up
to an interactive tea-pretation
The above is another possible response to Rukeyser’s Song, in a mood quite unlike the earlier one:
The world is full of loss; bring, wind, my love, my home is where we make our meeting-place, and love whatever I shall touch and read within that face. Lift, wind, my exile from my eyes; peace to look, life to listen and confess, freedom to find to find to find that nakedness.
love your images(mornglazed eyes) and the structure really makes me focus on the importance of your words. Really enjoyed this
This poem does take on a different mood than most of the others I have been putting out of late. Thanks 🙂
❤ 🙂