movement song

This movement slows your inward
slope    it

has the river’s back it has the
kind face of

molten deed    this movement will
wish you a

smile upon its hearse    we can
not say we

will not begin to sing    unless
the movement

flips out its mirror song and
all chant us

8 comments on “movement song

  1. thotpurge says:

    Thanks for sharing this.. I’m reading this for all meanings of the word movement (physical, revolutionary and musical) and it still works!

  2. Sumana Roy says:

    I like the poem moving in varied ways 🙂

  3. The spaces indicating a new intro into the next thought works so well. A catch of breath almost.

  4. This is very nice. 🙂

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