3 comments on “diction & red

  1. tmezpoetry says:

    ‘The whole is but parts; laugh
    Now, true to the grain and its small’

    That is compelling for me. Subjectively, it is needed in the thinking process.

    • huzaifazoom says:

      Interesting that you found the last bit most compelling, Tammy. I was explaining the poem to another friend and I had a conscious explanation for all lines except the last two which just had to be put in. So again, something to be said for listening to the poetic urgency that defies explanation 🙂

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