at the crowded sun’s retreat

where is my particular steel? at
dawn where the

ripe rope rustled as burn? at
the crowded sun’s

burnt retreat where it shadowed
a tired fight? or

where the howled slur visited thrice
and disappeared?

3 comments on “at the crowded sun’s retreat

  1. mrsorenson says:

    This would make for a wonderful unpopular song, I think.

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