The loud nail

The loud nail is your coffin’s
Mosque, its piece at one with

Door; aye, it will not speak
Now, should it? and why? Cast

The net on the shoulder of a
Fixed eye and sail eastward.

2 comments on “The loud nail

  1. mrsorenson says:

    The initial and superficial flavor is play, but the play is ripple over current. And the surprises in the poems line structure show that the current can play back at us too. Wonderful poem.

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